Lantern Beads
Posted on Tuesday, July 19th, 2011 at 1:54 pmIs it a good descriptive writing? (Court)?
This is a piece of my story. What do you think? Noah let out a breath as turned the corner. In front of him was a beautiful hall, richly decorated. Deep purple glass beads hanging from the ceiling, shimmering in the candlelight as a purple sheen. The lanterns burned with fire violet, obviously delighted. Tiny shards of glass were placed in the walls of mirror tiles, pillars marble to the ceiling instead. Halfway down the hall were the two men whispering to another. They kept walking and finally disappeared through a black bow. Noah could not imagine what was behind her, and did not particularly want to find out. But he had no choice, so that he and Ava made their way down the hall. Mrs. Cullen - Thank you for answering mine! I always aske people, and they never do. You have proved that I wrong! thank you.
good but a bit far fewer points. at the end instead of saying "had no choice, as he and Ava made their way to" try "Had no choice. Noah and Ava made their way down the hall, hang the other to support" or something like that good luck!
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